What is wrong with my Minecraft Youtube Channel! Please tell me what's good, and bad

Just looks like any other Minecraft channel that's on YouTube, you don't bring anything original to the table. I understand it's very hard too, if you keep working hard and posting videos as frequent as possible your channel will grow.

The number 1 type of channel on YouTube is Gamer channels, the number 1 game is Minecraft and 90% or more of these channels are produced by 13 year old boys who want to become Pewdepi.

I suspect 20 new Minecraft channels were created as I typed this response.

Your channel is going to get lost in all the others no matter how good it is. It is the most over-loaded type of channel in existence.

1. Nothing unique, just roaming around playing minigames on Mineplex with no commentary. If you're insistent on doing Minecraft videos, either do something we haven't seen thousands of times or be funny or interesting with your commentary.
2. Never type out your commentary as you go - it's tedius and amateurish. Get a microphone and talk.