Is this Minecraft map play through video good?

Me and the boyfriend have both decided to make youtube videos together, and this was our first proper play-through, please give us, as honest as you can on these points out of 10:
Commentary: ?/10
Quality: ?/10
Sound: ?/10
Content: ?/10

Please don't be really plain, constructive criticism is what we're after:3 And if you're not into Minecraft, don't purposely give us everything bad because you don't like the game. And please give us suggestions for improvements, though, we can't change fps ect (laptop, no desktop).

That is pretty good! This is what i'd give
quality- 10
sound-10
content 9.5
I can't really think of anything you can add to make it better, it's good.